3/4/08

caressing


little stars
Originally uploaded by setsunasky
Air moves swiftly over ground,

blades of grass folding.

Scent of petals floats

to a nearby stream.

Resisting water barely nudges;

rolling to the edge and

falling back again...

4 comments:

Candy Rant said...

You write some of the most gentle poetry I've ever read.

Delicious.

Citlali said...

oh, wow, thaaaank you -- that really makes me feel good. So glad you like these. I wrote them a few years ago and it seemed the right time to share. = ]

Dana said...

Oh my, that was wonderful.

Citlali said...

thank you!! = ]